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Post by The~Next~Big~Thing on Oct 22, 2002 12:32:28 GMT -5
After 21/10's Raw..... Raw - 28/10/02 *The Camara is backstage in Bischoff's Office. He is sitting at his desk when there's a knock on his door. He Says....* Bischoff: Ya, Come in.*The Door swings open and someone comes in. Bischoff goes from smiling to confused.* Bischoff: Excuse Me, but who are you?*The side of his head goes off screen, and the person whispers to him something, but we can't hear....* Bischoff: *looking surprised and shocked* No! You can't be.....You just can't be........ You Can't be Here!*small silence, and Bischoff Rub's his eyes. There a small 'Pop' from the Audience.* Bischoff: Listen Lady, but do you know what you are doing? You Don't, well I'll tell you.... *sighs* This person you say you are, dosn't exsit any more. 'She' is no longer here. So I don't know what your playing at, but it's got to stop now.*Some files are placed on his desk* Bischoff: What are these? *Bischoff listens to her, again, we can't hear her* Oh, ok, fine, I'll look at them.... *He starts checking the folders* *He looks shocked as he reads the files. Bischoff takes a picture, and looks at it stunned. He then turns to the women*. My God! *He places his hand over his mouth*. *Quickly* You and I need to talk...TO BE CONTINUED....
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Post by The~Next~Big~Thing on Oct 22, 2002 12:56:31 GMT -5
Later, that night... *Eric Bischoff comes down to the ring with the folders in his hands, and a mic in the other. He isn't his normal cheerful self* Bischoff: I've come down to the ring tonight, to say out a special accounctment. *Pause* That footage last week opened a lot of people's eyes, whenever it was disgust or stunned. Many people say it was too much..... Well, I'll start off by saying, 'I'm sorry'.*The Crowd Boos like Mad* Bischoff: I deserve that, after last week, I should of never put it on in the first place. *sighs* But I'm not the only one who argees. There are people here that say that same thing. But....*Big pause* Bischoff: I have someone else here that argees as well....*A Women comes down to the ring. Many people cheer, probably because they know who she is. She climbs into the ring and stands near Eric* Bischoff: Now, this women here, has something to say to everyone. She was involded with the footage last week. Please, tell us, why you are here....*The Mic is headed to her* Women: Hi. *Pause* I'll tell you who I am in a minute. First, I would like to say 'sorry' on what happened last week, it was partly my fault. *Crowd Boos*. Let me explain, I didn't mean for anything like this to happen, It was an accident. *Crowd continues to boo* Triple H and Ric Flair don't know what they are doing. They shouldn't do things like that towards this poor woman. They should....Eric takes the Mic.... Bischoff: I'm extremely sorry. Although this is probably the most important news we may ever have, your 3 minutes have just... run... out.*Jamal and Rosie enter the ring, and corner the women* Bischoff: This is one story that we are keeping under wraps.*Just as Jamal & Rosie start to attack, Kane's entrance music hits, and Kane runs down to the ring. He climbs in and starts attacking the Island Boyz. Finally, the ambush stops after a double chokeslam. Eric and the Island Boyz exit the ring and leave, as Kane and the women stay*. TO BE CONTINUED....
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Post by The~Next~Big~Thing on Oct 22, 2002 13:29:37 GMT -5
*10 seconda after they leave, Kane collects the mic and start talking*. Kane: Excuse me Lady, but who are you to nose about in my affairs.....Women: I'm here to say something...Kane: WHAT?!Women: What do you mean WHAT?!, don't you know who I am?Kane: Frankly, at the moment, I couldn't care less. These 2 assholes (HHH and Flair) have wrecked my life. First, they tell the whole world... that I...Am a Murderer, although I'm NOT! Then, Flair and Triple H screw me from becoming a World Champion, my FIRST WORLD CHAMPIONSHIP!, then, last week, those sick, twisted people, show that disturbed footage, of what looks like me and Katie Vick. Well lady, unless your a damn good entertainer, and can make me smile, LEAVE! All of this, because I Killed Katie Vick!*There's a silent pause from both Kane and the audience* Women: Kane, there's something I have to tell you. I came here tonight to say sorry... to you. I should of told you ages, maybe years ago. *Long Pause* I'm here to tell you....*Pause*...Katie Vick was NEVER Killed!*The Crowd bursts from silence, a big uproar is heard. Kane looks stunned.* Kane: Well Lady, HOW THEW HELL DO YOU KNOW SHE ISN'T DEAD, UH?Woman: It's because.....It's because....I'M KATIE VICK!*The crowd gets louder to hear that Katie Vick isn't dead. Kane looks stunned, before walking towards the ringpost with his head down. He stays like that for at least 25 seconds*. Katie: I'm Katie Vick.Kane: No, you can't be.... You can't be... You were killed in a car crash, how is it you?Katie: Let me explain. It was true that we were in a Car Crash, it was true that we had both drunk too much, but it wasn't true that I died instantly. That night, in which I was carried off to Hospital, I wasn't dead. You were being removed from the car as I left. As you recovered from your injuries, you found out that you could no longer speak, and had burns across your arms and parts of your chest. By the looks of it, those burns healed completely, which was fortunent. You lost your memory from that night, till HHH and Flair told you several weeks ago. I was in hospital for 5 months, having bones heal and flesh repair it's self. As soon as I left, I started looking for you, Kane, but you had changed you I.D. Only until a month ago, I was able to tell who you were. It was you. So, what I'm saying, Kane, is this. You aren't a Murderer, and you never were.*The crowd is gripped after those words. Kane is shaken by the news. There is another 1/2 minute pause, in which they look into each other's eyes* *Kane goes up to Katie, one step at a time, til they are a finger's reath away from each other* Kane: Katie...I....I.....*Kane goes to Katie, picks her up and hugs her in joyness. The crowd is blowing the roof off the stadium. But the cheers turn to extreme Boos as HHH enters via the Titantron with a microphone* TO BE CONTINUED.....
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Post by The~Next~Big~Thing on Oct 22, 2002 14:20:02 GMT -5
HHH: What the hell is going on here? Who is she? WHAT'S GOING ON?!*The crowd boos as Kane starts talking to Him* Kane: HHH, your little game is finished. Your mind tricks have no effect anymore, Hunter. Face facts, Katie is alive, and your plot, it's over.*Massive Pops from the crowd. Triple H is pacing around furiously* HHH: No, Kane. That Bitch is a fake! That Bitch isn't Katie Vick.Katie: Excuse me, but there is proof. *She goes to the folders and takes a picture. The Camara views in on the picture.* This is me in the same car with my Boyfriend. This was taken from camaras around the bar. If you can please, place this picture on the Titantron. *The Picture appears up on screen*. Now, zoom in to the woman's face. *It zooms in on screen*. Now, can you enchance the image plz. *The image becomes more clear, and it looks like the face of Katie*. That is me. That's my car reg. and type. In fact... *A normal Picture of her near the car is shown on screen*. That's my car, and my face. As you can see, my face may of aged a bit over the years, but if we match that picture with one of me taken a month ago.... *A Photo of her now is shown on screen*, that women is, without a doubt me.*HHH is spechless* By the way, the seman found in the car, was that of my boyfriend, not of Kane. Kane didn't rape me or hurt me in anyway.*HHH is noding his head, the same way as when Mick Foley returned before Wrestlemania 2000* Kane: Face the facts now HHH, your plan, IT'S RUINED! All this talk of murder, has made me furious. At Survivor Series, I want a Re-Match for that title, and then, you will see my fury reign, as I Kane, win the World Heavyweight Championship!*As Kane finishes, and as the crowd cheers, Ric Flair appears from behind with a steel chair, and hits Kane in the Back. Kane dosn't re-act from the chair shot. Instead, turns round, and kicks the crap outta Ric Flair. As he's doing this, Katie exits to Ringside, and Triple H enters the Ring. Triple H picks up the chair, and tries hitting Kane, only for him to knock it out of his hands, catch him by the throat, and CHOKESLAM him into the chair. Ric Flair recovers, and low blows Kane. But Kane dosn't go down. Instead, Kane CHOKESLAMS Ric Flair onto Triple H, who is standing outside the Ring. Both man fall and start to run away. Kane asks Katie for something. Katie grabs the World Title, and hands it to Kane. As Triple H and Flair run up the ramp, looking back in terror, Kane lifts his hands, drop them to cause flames, and hold Katie in his left arm, the World Title up in the air on his right, and smiles with the look of Revenge as RAW draws to a close. The crowd go berserk for Kane during this entire part.
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Post by The~Next~Big~Thing on Oct 22, 2002 14:28:11 GMT -5
What you think of my storyline, eh? I know it may sound crappy in parts, but I was thinking of it as more of a base line script. Post any comments here.
I wanted the Kane Murderer Storyline to have a twist to the end, which makes Kane now more dominate. I was also thinking, if something like this was done, Katie could become Kane's manager. After Survivor Series, Kane could be Champion, only for Triple H to capture Katie. The story would continue at Armaggeon, which which Kane wins, after dominenting the match for most of it. Triple H then starts to turn on Flair after what has happened. At this time, they decide they need more help, in which the 4 Horseman Storyline comes in (get it?). Kane will then continue with Katie as his manager into another storyline, which would be much better than the Murderer angle one.
So, That Question again, what you think of my script?
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Post by Genetic_Freak on Oct 22, 2002 18:03:43 GMT -5
Not a bad piece of writing ther my friend..
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Post by CandyKANE on Oct 22, 2002 19:11:31 GMT -5
Not a bad piece of writing ther my friend.. Not bad at all!
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Post by The~Next~Big~Thing on Oct 23, 2002 6:32:34 GMT -5
Thxs Guys, glad it was decent.
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Post by -STITAN- on Nov 6, 2002 14:32:55 GMT -5
Much better!
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